Human Feedback Matters! 

In both language and literacy development, feedback isn’t an add-on—it’s the key learning engine!

Students consistently make stronger gains when they receive frequent, timely, and meaningful feedback during their learning process, not at the end when their young minds have moved on.

Yet in many classrooms, the intense focus on reading and skills leaves little room for feedback on listening, speaking, and expressive writing—equal foundations of literacy and language development. 

Feedback Across All Language Modalities Matters

Literacy and language proficiency develop best through human interactions—from teachers and peers alike!  Students thrive when they must:
• Listen – to clarify meaning, confirm understanding, and notice key language structures;
• Speak – to refine pronunciation, grammar, vocabulary choice, and discourse patterns;
• Read – to improve comprehension, strategy use, and meaning-making;
• Write – to strengthen sentence construction, cohesion, and clarity of ideas.

Interestingly, feedback on oral expression is one of the most overlooked and under-appreciated learning activities, even though oral language practice plays a critical role in vocabulary growth, syntax development, and comprehension.

Teacher Feedback: The Essential Ingredient

Technology can provide useful feedback for skills development—such as correctness, pacing, or repetition—but it cannot replace the human touch.

Only a teacher’s feedback tells a student: I see you. I hear you. I’m helping you grow. 

Teachers can effectively:
• Interpret intent and partial understanding;
• Respond to cultural and linguistic nuance;
• Encourage risk-taking and confidence in language use;
• Model rich, responsive language in the moment.

This is especially important for developing readers and language learners who rely on responsive interaction to build meaning, identity, and confidence.

Human Feedback Fuels Literacy and Language Growth

Ideally, feedback is “baked into” instructional design and not reserved for the end of an assignment or unit. Research suggests that the most effective feedback is:
Frequent (embedded daily, not episodic);
• Low-stakes (guidance, not judgment);
• Actionable (clear next steps).

Takeaway for Educators

Frequent, human feedback—across listening, speaking, reading, and expressive writing—is one of the most powerful tools we have to support literacy and language development. 

Technology can enhance learning experiences and help extend opportunities for skills practice, but the power of a teacher’s feedback will likely remain the essential ingredient that motivates a child’s learning journey.

Cynthia Harrison Barbera

Cynthia Harrison Barbera is President and CEO, StoryWorld International.  She served as VP Educational Technology for Scholastic and is the recipient of two US Presidential awards for educational programs. An Emmy-award winner for a television series on education, she has taught English to native-speakers and ELL students in the US and overseas.

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Why Kids Are Bored in School (and How Stories Can Help)

Recently, I’ve noticed how many students in almost every grade constantly need to be reminded to stay “on task.”

Many sit for hours, working through repetitive drills, bland texts, and worksheets that focus on “building skills” rather than sparking their imagination. 

Truth is, they’re bored. And despite all those hours, many still struggle to read well.

The Literacy Pendulum

As teaching literacy continues to swing between instructional extremes, too many kids are still falling through the cracks. On one side, phonics-heavy programs can over-emphasize sounds, blends, and spelling patterns until reading becomes a decoding exercise.

On the other end, a whole-language-only approach exposes children to many books and stories (which is good) but often narrows the vocabulary to “grade-level texts” to make them comprehensible. That means students don’t encounter the more challenging narratives and content that are – well, more interesting.

And neither approach makes much room for curiosity. 

When lessons become scripted routines or leveled-down for easier reading, even the bright students lose interest. Stories — once a child’s first love — become just another task to finish.

The Spark That’s Missing

Research shows that stories activate far more of the brain than isolated instruction. When a child listens to a story, they imagine, empathize, predict, and recall — all the processes that make learning stick.

The stories themselves matter too! When the texts are superficial and presented only for decoding or ease of reading — at the detriment of significance — they become bland and uninteresting.

What’s missing?  Relevance. Kids crave meaning. They want to understand why something matters, not just how to do it.

The Magic of Stories

Every story — whether it’s about science, math, social studies or just a fictional tale — is a glorious invitation to think, wonder, and explore new ideas.

Instead of drilling words in isolation, children can strengthen language skills, develop richer vocabulary and understand content more deeply — all through the learning power of stories.

StoryWorld’s Literacy Ecosystem

At StoryWorld, each of our stories intentionally opens an ecosystem of literacy — with follow-up activities that encourage listening, speaking, and writing. A learner might retell a story in their own words, record a narration, or write and illustrate a related personal story. 

Instead of drilling words in isolation, children learn through the story. Each narrative is rich in vocabulary, visuals, and meaning — and every new word appears in a context that makes sense. 

Kids can click any unfamiliar word to hear it aloud, see it used again, or explore how it connects to the larger story. They don’t just memorize; they understand.

These multimodal experiences engage more of the brain and keep curiosity alive.

From obligation to adventure

When children feel empowered to ask questions and make new connections, reading transforms from an obligation into an adventure — from a disconnected exercise to a rewarding experience. 

That’s the magic that creates a curious mind for the rest of their lives.

Cynthia Harrison Barbera

Cynthia Harrison Barbera is President and CEO, StoryWorld International.  She served as VP Educational Technology for Scholastic and is the recipient of two US Presidential awards for educational programs. An Emmy-award winner for a television series on education, she has taught English to native-speakers and ELL students in the US and overseas.